First draft - How it went

I think the editing of the first draft went well because we finished it to a good standard. I am pleased with the outcome considering its just a first draft. We still need to touch up some parts of the video such as the part where the singer's head was cut of slightly. Also we want to re-do the rapping because it didnt go so well on the day. Also we want to add more performance to the video and get more of the band in because in the chorus it was mainly the singer being shown.So considering all this I think it was succesful.